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 ## In the Media
 
-#### Trans people are generally depicted negatively.
+#### Trans people are generally depicted in a negative manner.
 
 *   [Colorado State University: Matthews 16](https://mountainscholar.org/bitstream/handle/10217/178827/Matthews_colostate_0053N_13859.pdf?sequence=1&isAllowed=y)
     *   Interesting (and long) qualitative analysis on the **depiction of transgender people in _Sports Illustrated_** over past decades.