From cf0a92f7c5d5d9ff62bc8cef45827bc1ac5385b6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: emma <emma@tebibyte.media>
Date: Thu, 22 Sep 2022 17:32:35 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] added more descriptive html elements

---
 about/index.html   | 19 +++++++++----------
 network/index.html | 25 ++++++++++---------------
 2 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-)

diff --git a/about/index.html b/about/index.html
index 958a66a..b90e494 100644
--- a/about/index.html
+++ b/about/index.html
@@ -77,18 +77,18 @@
                     <h3 id="editors">
                         <a href="#editors">Editors</a>
                     </h3>
-                    <h4>
+                    <address>
                         <a href="mailto:editors@tebibyte.media">
                         editors@tebibyte.media</a>
-                    </h4>
+                    </address>
                     <p>
                     Our editors are responsible for maintaining the
-                    <a href="/blog">weblog</a>, editing submissions made by and
+                    <a href="/blog">weblog</a>, editing submissions and
                     coordinating with staff, Network representatives, and guest
-                    writers. as well as reading and approving Network
+                    writers, as well as reading and approving Network
                     applications. Our lead editor is <a href="/~trinity">Trinity
                     </a> and her team includes <a href="/~vista">vista</a> and
-                    <a href="~thegoose">thegoose</a>.
+                    <a href="/~thegoose">thegoose</a>.
                     <h3 id="platform-managers">
                         <a href="#platform-managers">Platform Managers</a>
                     </h3>
@@ -100,9 +100,9 @@
                     and <a href="">Matrix</a>), as well as maintaining
                     Network members' infrastructure when necessary. The
                     standards by which the Project operates are managed by them
-                    as well. Our lead platform manager is
-                    <a href="/~mars">mars</a> and its team includes
-                    <a href="/~sashakoshka">sasha</a> and Emma.
+                    as well. Our lead platform managers are
+                    <a href="/~mars">mars</a> and Emma, and their team includes
+                    <a href="/~sashakoshka">sasha</a>.
                     </p>
                     <h2 id="network">
                         <a href=#network>Network</a>
@@ -145,8 +145,7 @@
                     should be free and publicly accessible. To that end, we
                     promote, share, connect, and support like-minded developers,
                     artists, writers, and creators whose work progresses toward
-                    this goal. Read more at our
-                    <a href="/blog">blog</a>.
+                    this goal. Read more at our <a href="/blog">blog</a>.
                     </p>
                 </section>
                 <h2 id="technical">
diff --git a/network/index.html b/network/index.html
index 13de7c2..ce3126e 100644
--- a/network/index.html
+++ b/network/index.html
@@ -75,24 +75,19 @@
                 </h4>
                 <p>
                 The members of the Network are split into two separate
-                categories: a "project" in this context is an entity whose
-                constituents are individuals; a "network" is one whose members
-                are projects themselves, or a mix of projects and other
-                networks; a Tebibyte Media "project" does not necessarily have
-                to be a free software project; it can be anything involving
-                strong public engagement and iterative development. For example,
-                a post-modernist fiction blog can count as a Tebibyte Media
-                project—as long as the work is ongoing and the blog is shared at
+                categories: a <dfn id="project">project</dfn> in this context is
+                an entity whose constituents are individuals; a
+                <dfn id="network">network</dfn> is one whose members are
+                projects themselves, or a mix of projects and other networks; a
+                Tebibyte Media project does not necessarily have to be a free
+                software project; it can be anything involving strong public
+                engagement and iterative development. For example, a
+                post-modernist fiction blog can count as a Tebibyte Media
+                project as long as the work is ongoing and the blog is shared at
                 no cost to its readers.
                 </p>
                 <p>
-                A "project" could be an open writing publication requiring
-                attention or third-party reviewing, a free software project
-                looking for a userbase and pool of talented developers, or
-                an art project looking for exposure and contributors.
-                </p>
-                <p>
-                A "network" might be a webring, an online social hub for the
+                A network might be a webring, an online social hub for the
                 advancement of some idea or combined agenda, or an
                 organization which has multiple distinct components or
                 internal projects with distinct individuals heading them up.